Shagufta Deen

Hey Shagufta,
I liked this story too! I could relate, having sisters myself. I agree with the others too however, separating your work into paragraphs makes it seem a little less long winded. It would help shape your arguments better. Although I do like how you’ve identified techniques to explain and support your arguments, it shows how much thought you gave towards the story and the extent of your understanding of the subject.

http://shaguftadeen93.wordpress.com/2013/09/01/write-a-short-review-of-the-mansfield-story-that-appealed-to-you-most/comment-page-1/#comment-77

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